Friday, February 01, 2013

Trifecta Weekend Challenge

Now that I've found Trifecta, and have started writing for it/reading the entries and getting more inspired, I'm attempting to enter more challenges. This weekend's challenge was to write 33 words of dialogue. This is what I came up with: 

“What was I like, the night we met?”
“Honestly, you were kind of a dick to me.”
“Oh.”
“That’s OK. I was kind of bitch to you. Then, you became human, connected, real.”

11 comments:

Libby said...

haha! Sounds like honest dialogue! Nicely done :)

Bo said...

This is great!

Gretchen Fogelstrom said...

One year anniversary? good job.

PurpleMoose said...

then you became human, connected, real.

those are REALLY good words!!!!

btw - I am not a robot. :/

Atreyee said...

Aww,so cute-wonderful stage in a relationship when you are comfortable enough to talk about your first impressions-very well captured:-)

lumdog2012 said...

Very cool dialogue.

Sandra Crook said...

Sweet talkers, the pair of them.

Draug said...

This could make for some nice talk at an anniversary dinner (: I love it!

Corinne said...

Makes me wonder why we can't just drop the charades at first go, why we have to pretend to be something else in order to impress?

(Of course not everyone does this, but it seems to be the norm.)

Trifecta said...

That kind of sums up a lot of first moments, right? Nice job! Glad you're joining up with us! Just thought I'd let you know that you'd probably receive more feedback from other Trifectans if you'd disable word verification on your posts. Up to you! Thanks!

The Bloody Munchkin said...

Thanks for the comments and lovely feedback. I'll think about disabling word verification. I appreciate all the input.